I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ryan. It's Miss Waho from next door in Whakamanawa. I am glad to see that you have started posting your learning to your blog. The quality of your writing in this slide is really impressive. I like that you added a picture to each slide which makes it more interesting for your audience. Maybe when we are in our lockdown bubble at school, I can show you how to embed a slide so it fits within your blog page. We could share some of your Literacy learning too.
Hi Ryan, you have done some really good work here. Ryan you might need to adjust the size of your slide.Your intro, wolf needed an s addes to it,I would of liked to see another sentence in your intro.I would of liked an outro also.Slide 6-19 are blank, so edit those out for your blog reader.Still good work Ryan.I just wanted to ask if you would consider blogging about lockdown and some of the things that you have been doing to keep yourself amused?Stay awesome and be kind.
Kia ora Ryan.
ReplyDeleteIt's Miss Waho from next door in Whakamanawa. I am glad to see that you have started posting your learning to your blog. The quality of your writing in this slide is really impressive. I like that you added a picture to each slide which makes it more interesting for your audience.
Maybe when we are in our lockdown bubble at school, I can show you how to embed a slide so it fits within your blog page. We could share some of your Literacy learning too.
Hi Ryan, you have done some really good work here. Ryan you might need to adjust the size of your slide.Your intro, wolf needed an s addes to it,I would of liked to see another sentence in your intro.I would of liked an outro also.Slide 6-19 are blank, so edit those out for your blog reader.Still good work Ryan.I just wanted to ask if you would consider blogging about lockdown and some of the things that you have been doing to keep yourself amused?Stay awesome and be kind.
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